{"id":5376,"date":"2026-09-26T17:20:25","date_gmt":"2026-09-26T15:20:25","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/duhovyrok.sk\/qys\/?p=5376"},"modified":"2026-09-30T17:40:15","modified_gmt":"2026-09-30T15:40:15","slug":"bordel-z-rieky-bez-namocenia-nohavic-nevylovis","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/duhovyrok.sk\/qys\/bordel-z-rieky-bez-namocenia-nohavic-nevylovis\/","title":{"rendered":"Bordel z rieky bez namo\u010denia nohav\u00edc nevylov\u00ed\u0161"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\"><strong>Autorka: Emma Vi\u010danov\u00e1<\/strong> <strong>\/<\/strong> <strong>Ilustr\u00e1cia: Vikt\u00f3ria Szabov\u00e1<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\"><em>Text sme prv\u00fd raz publikovali v \u010d\u00edsle Leto 2026<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\"><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\"><em>Z\u00e1chody \u0161tudentsk\u00e9ho baru, \u013eavi\u010diarske ulice a izolovan\u00e9 m\u00fariky pri rieke sa v texte Emmy Vi\u010danovej st\u00e1vaj\u00fa t\u00fdm najint\u00edmnej\u0161\u00edm miestom, na ktorom sa vymie\u0148aj\u00fa prv\u00e9 pusy s diev\u010da\u0165om a \u0161eptom sa zdie\u013eaj\u00fa sk\u00fasenosti, ktor\u00e9 s\u00fa vo svojej esencii tak\u00e9 \u017eensk\u00e9. Autorka n\u00e1m predstavuje Hanu, diev\u010da, ktor\u00e9 m\u00e1 po dlhom \u010dase rande a mus\u00ed napravi\u0165 karmick\u00fd balans svojho sveta, aby dopadlo dobre, pri\u010dom sa v spomienkach vracia k n\u00e1dhern\u00fdm diev\u010dat\u00e1m so \u0161koricov\u00fdmi slim\u00e1kmi a&nbsp;tie\u017e k star\u00fdm mu\u017eom, ktor\u00ed si zamie\u0148aj\u00fa \u0161tudentky na svojich hodin\u00e1ch s randiacimi appkami. Vypo\u010dujte si Hanu, jej pr\u00edbeh a d\u00fafajte s \u0148ou, \u017ee ju vesm\u00edr obdaruje l\u00e1skou.<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\"><em>Emma Vi\u010danov\u00e1 sa do n\u00e1\u0161ho v\u00fdberu dostala ako mlad\u00e1, za\u010d\u00ednaj\u00faca autorka, ktor\u00e1 v\u0161etok svoj \u010das venuje divadlu a literat\u00fare. Ako \u010dlenka organiza\u010dn\u00e9ho t\u00edmu Medziriadkov sa pravidelne stret\u00e1va s novou gener\u00e1ciou autorstiev, pre ktor\u00e9 organizuje aktivity, kde m\u00f4\u017eu uk\u00e1za\u0165 svoj talent \u2013 a teraz je na\u010dase, aby ho uk\u00e1zala ona.<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\"><em>V\u00fdber textu mala na starosti Sabrina Katonoff.<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Hana pri prech\u00e1dzke urob\u00ed dobr\u00fd skutok. V potoku uvid\u00ed kanister od oleja do auta, zachyten\u00fd v naplavenom dreve. Zlat\u00fd plast h\u00e1d\u017ee na hladinu odlesky, keby nemala okuliare, mo\u017eno si ho zamen\u00ed za vz\u00e1cny druh ryby.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Mohla by pokr\u010di\u0165 ramenami, \u00eds\u0165 \u010falej, ve\u010f aj tak sa pon\u00e1h\u013ea, nemala by sa zbyto\u010dne zdr\u017eiava\u0165. Po dlhom \u010dase m\u00e1 rande, mus\u00ed si e\u0161te umy\u0165 vlasy a nalakova\u0165 nechty. Potrebuje v\u0161ak spravi\u0165 dobr\u00fd skutok. Je to nutnos\u0165, aby rande dopadlo dobre, urobi\u0165 nie\u010do pekn\u00e9, nie\u010do pre plan\u00e9tu \u2013 a vesm\u00edr ju na opl\u00e1tku obdaruje l\u00e1skou.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">V karmickej tabu\u013eke m\u00e1 kv\u00f4li nemu aj tak mno\u017estvo m\u00ednusov\u00fdch bodov.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Pre nikoho to nerob\u00ed, pri potoku je sama. Vyzuje si tenisky, vyhrnie nohavice a vkro\u010d\u00ed do vody. Potok je hlb\u0161\u00ed, ako sa zdal z l\u00e1vky. Ponor\u00ed sa po p\u00e1s, rif\u013eovina nasiakne \u0161pinavou vodou. Pre nikoho to nerob\u00ed, no v hlave po\u010duje jej hlas.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Si odv\u00e1\u017ena! Lovi\u0165 odpad z vody. Dnes je u\u017e v\u0161etk\u00fdm v\u0161etko jedno.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Pod p\u00e4tami slizk\u00e9 kamene. Medzi prstami bahno. Niekde rozv\u00edri \u0161trk. Pocitovo trv\u00e1 hodiny, k\u00fdm sa ku kanistru dostane.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Ak\u00e1si pani si ju odfot\u00ed. K\u00fdm sa neozve, nevie o nej.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">To d\u00e1m na facebookov\u00fa str\u00e1nku mesta! Ak\u00e1 ste odv\u00e1\u017ena.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Pani nevie, \u017ee Hana rob\u00ed dobr\u00fd skutok, aby si vylep\u0161ila bodov\u00e9 sk\u00f3re. Mysl\u00ed na tie m\u00ednusov\u00e9 \u010d\u00edsla, ktor\u00e9 v\u010faka nemu nazbierala. Je predur\u010den\u00e1 na storo\u010dia nevydaren\u00fdch rande. Ani kus zlat\u00e9ho plastu to nenaprav\u00ed.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Kanister polo\u017e\u00ed na breh. Upch\u00e1 si nos, aby jej do mozgu nevliezla am\u00e9ba, a hod\u00ed sa do studenej vody.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Tesne predt\u00fdm, ako jej u\u0161i za\u013eahne pr\u00fad, po\u010duje v\u00fdkrik tej \u017eeny.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Na rande si oble\u010die obtiahnut\u00e9 \u010dierne \u0161aty, ktor\u00e9 mala na pohrebe starej mamy. Magda jej s\u013e\u00fabila Viechu pod hradom a ona nem\u00e1 ni\u010d elegantnej\u0161ie. Ke\u010f si ma\u013euje linky, takmer sa dovracia. Posledn\u00e9 rande za\u017eila s n\u00edm. V septembri. Teraz je j\u00fan.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">S Magdou sa spoznala e\u0161te na v\u00fd\u0161ke, bola o ro\u010dn\u00edk vy\u0161\u0161ie. Nikdy sa ve\u013ea nerozpr\u00e1vali, zbl\u00ed\u017eil ich a\u017e spolo\u010dn\u00fd podnet na mocensk\u00e9 praktiky pedag\u00f3ga c\u00e9\u010dkov\u00e9ho predmetu kreat\u00edvneho p\u00edsania. Boli piati, pedag\u00f3g sa nau\u010dil ich men\u00e1 a \u010dasom nen\u00e1padne pre\u0161iel z vykania na tykanie. Potom komentoval Hanin \u00fa\u010des a Magdinu kr\u00e1tku suk\u0148u. Zvy\u0161n\u00ed traja boli chlapci, citliv\u00e9 du\u0161i\u010dky, ako ich pedag\u00f3g naz\u00fdval.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Literat\u00fara je \u010disto \u017eensk\u00e1 z\u00e1le\u017eitos\u0165, no predsa ide t\u00fdm mu\u017eom lep\u0161ie. Lebo mu\u017ei, \u010do sa literat\u00fare venuj\u00fa, s\u00fa empatick\u00ed a krehk\u00ed, no aj h\u013abav\u00ed. Ich jemn\u00e9 prst\u00edky klepkaj\u00fa do jemnej kl\u00e1vesni\u010dky a tvoria jemn\u00e9 b\u00e1sne a rom\u00e1ny. A je ich m\u00e1lo! \u017densk\u00e9 poviedo\u010dky a b\u00e1sni\u010dky sa str\u00e1caj\u00fa v z\u00e1plave in\u00fdch \u017eensk\u00fdch b\u00e1sni\u010diek a poviedo\u010diek. Ale keby Hana chcela, on pozn\u00e1 zop\u00e1r vydavate\u013eov, ve\u010f poviedky nem\u00e1 \u00faplne m\u00e1rne.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Polo\u017e\u00ed jej ruku na stehno. Bola to individu\u00e1lna hodina.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Podali podnet a uspeli. To neb\u00fdva zvykom. Ur\u010dite zav\u00e1\u017eilo, \u017ee ich podr\u017eali aj spolu\u017eiaci.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Ve\u010der sa s&nbsp;Magdou opili a bozk\u00e1vali na z\u00e1chodoch \u0161tudentsk\u00e9ho baru. Magda jej na spr\u00e1vy neodp\u00edsala, o tri t\u00fd\u017edne preru\u0161ila \u0161t\u00fadium a odi\u0161la do \u0160panielska. Nie kv\u00f4li Hane. Na z\u00e1chodoch \u0161tudentsk\u00fdch barov sa bozk\u00e1val ur\u010dite ka\u017ed\u00fd a len ob\u010das to nie\u010do znamenalo.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Bola to prv\u00e1 Hanina pusa s diev\u010da\u0165om.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Odp\u00ed\u0161e a\u017e teraz. Sedem rokov po prom\u00f3cii.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Hana je magisterka umenia, vy\u0161tudovala divadeln\u00fa vedu a je soci\u00e1lne neschopn\u00e1. Tieto faktory sa odr\u00e1\u017eaj\u00fa za stolom, ke\u010f sa op\u00e1len\u00e1 Magda rozkrikuje na cel\u00fa terasu. \u0160aty si neobliekla, sed\u00ed tam v rif\u013eov\u00fdch kra\u0165asoch a bielom tielku, ktor\u00e9 jej ledva zakr\u00fdva prsia.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Chod\u00ed\u0161 s niek\u00fdm?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Hana nevie, ako niekomu vysvetli\u0165, \u017ee nerand\u00ed. Je sama a vyhovuje jej to. Raz nebola sama a odvtedy m\u00e1 m\u00ednusov\u00e9 body.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Rozhliadne sa okolo seba. Nevedela by tu spravi\u0165 nejak\u00fd dobr\u00fd skutok? Nepotrebuje niekto s nie\u010d\u00edm pom\u00f4c\u0165? \u017dene pri dver\u00e1ch sa pomaly k\u013a\u017ee ramienko kabelky po hrane stoli\u010dky. O min\u00fatu by k nej vedela prisko\u010di\u0165 a poda\u0165 jej ju. Bude sa to r\u00e1ta\u0165?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Magda teraz \u017eije sama v \u0160panielsku. Na Slovensko sa vr\u00e1tila, lebo jej umiera otec.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Hana vypije ve\u013ea v\u00edna. Nie v\u0161ak to\u013eko, aby prestala myslie\u0165 na dobr\u00e9 skutky. Rande je pln\u00e9 tr\u00e1pneho ticha a jej soci\u00e1lnej neschopnosti. Je nes\u00fastreden\u00e1 a pripit\u00e1 \u2013 opak slova o\u010daruj\u00faca.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Magda sa na\u010diahne cez st\u00f4l a chyt\u00ed ju za ruku. Bola mlad\u00e1 a sprost\u00e1. Prv\u00e9 mesiace mimo republiky neust\u00e1le refre\u0161ovala Hanin Instagram. Pre istotu v\u0161ak ni\u010d nelajkovala.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Hane zatrasie vn\u00fatrom, jej org\u00e1ny sa \u00faplne prevr\u00e1tia. \u017dal\u00fado\u010dn\u00e9 \u0161\u0165avy prete\u010d\u00fa do mozgu a za\u010dn\u00fa ho pomaly rozklada\u0165. Nerandila ve\u010dnos\u0165. Je sama a vyhovuje jej to. Namiesto Magdin\u00fdch pier sa s\u00fastred\u00ed na m\u00ednusov\u00e9 \u010d\u00edsla. Nezasl\u00fa\u017ei si, aby ju ktoko\u013evek dr\u017eal za ruku s takou jemnos\u0165ou.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Vystra\u0161ene sa jej vytrhne. Um\u00fdva si tv\u00e1r na z\u00e1chodoch, ktor\u00e9 vo\u0148aj\u00fa levandu\u013eou.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Ke\u010f Hana cestovala po Nemecku, asi dva roky po \u0161kole, spoznala D\u0101visa z Est\u00f3nska. Na ve\u013ekej konferencii dramaturgov vyzeral medzi v\u0161etk\u00fdmi prispievate\u013emi a\u017e pr\u00edli\u0161 mlado, tv\u00e1r natiahnut\u00e1, \u00fazka. \u0160ed\u00e1 mikina a \u0161irok\u00e9 rifle. Splietla si ho so \u0161tudentom, po\u010das prest\u00e1vky sa ho sp\u00fdta na p\u00e1rty, \u010di by sa s \u0148ou nechcel opi\u0165, najlep\u0161ie do r\u00e1na \u0161otova\u0165 zlat\u00e9 tekily, \u0161korica rozsypan\u00e1 po stole a prsty lepkav\u00e9 od pomaran\u010da. Mo\u017eno aj oni bud\u00fa lepkav\u00ed od pomaran\u010da. Niekto sa na nej zasmeje v inom jazyku, takto sa mlad\u00e9 diev\u010dat\u00e1 rozpr\u00e1vaj\u00fa s profesormi?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">D\u0101vis s tromi est\u00f3nskymi de\u0165mi, est\u00f3nskou man\u017eelkou a americk\u00fdm \u00fasmevom.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Pova\u017eoval za ve\u013emi osvie\u017euj\u00face, \u017ee vedie konverz\u00e1cie s takou \u013eahkos\u0165ou. To je vkuse nejak\u00e1 proforma, nejak\u00fd akademick\u00fd v\u00fdraz, v jeho veku ho u\u017e nikto nepoz\u00fdva na p\u00e1rty.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Star\u00fd mu\u017e a mlad\u00e9 diev\u010da. Liter\u00e1rny tr\u00f3p, ktor\u00e9ho sa Hana nezbav\u00ed. Mo\u017eno raz bude bali\u0165 o to\u013eko mlad\u0161\u00edch chlapcov, ke\u010f ju neust\u00e1le balia o to\u013eko star\u0161\u00ed mu\u017ei.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">D\u0101vis robil \u0161kolite\u013ea Anete. S nakrivo ostrihanou ofinou a ostr\u00fdmi \u010drtami. Je bled\u00e1, bled\u0161ia ako Hana. Ple\u0165 m\u00e1 hladk\u00fa, Hanin prud\u0161\u00ed pohyb rukou, tak\u00fd, pri ktorom ju omylom \u0161krabne, by jej rozrezal ko\u017eu, pretrhol \u017eily a ona vykrv\u00e1ca pri termosk\u00e1ch s hnusnou k\u00e1vou. Anete sa na \u0148u usmieva a vtipkuje v r\u00e1mci ich vz\u00e1jomn\u00fdch znalost\u00ed angli\u010dtiny.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Hana ju zavol\u00e1 do jednej pek\u00e1rne pri hoteli. B\u00fdvaj\u00fa na \u013eavi\u010diarskej ulici, pre \u0148u je \u013eavi\u010diarska, ke\u010f\u017ee ment\u00e1lne nikdy neopust\u00ed v\u00fdchodn\u00fd blok, hoci sa v \u0148om u\u017e nenarodila. Je to jej ob\u013e\u00faben\u00e1 ulica v meste, pln\u00e1 niche obchod\u00edkov, eko zero waste bezobalov\u00fdch potrav\u00edn a kaviarn\u00ed s v\u00fdberovou kyslou k\u00e1vou, ktor\u00fa ale aj tak Nemci nevedia spr\u00e1vne pripravi\u0165.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">V pek\u00e1rni si daj\u00fa \u0161koricov\u00e9 slim\u00e1ky. Anete jej rozpr\u00e1va o Est\u00f3nsku a spolo\u010dnom v\u00fdskume s D\u0101visom. Rie\u0161ia ekologick\u00fa udr\u017eate\u013enos\u0165 v divadl\u00e1ch, pravdepodobne si na tom Anete sprav\u00ed doktorand\u00faru a Hana jej nad\u0161ene prikyvuje, no chce sa sp\u00fdta\u0165, \u010di je ich vz\u0165ah mocensky vyrovnan\u00fd.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Je im dobre, preto tieto t\u00e9my nebude otv\u00e1ra\u0165.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">D\u0101vis sa k nim pripoj\u00ed. Anete m\u00e1 v\u0161etku ich hotovos\u0165 a on potrebuje peniaze na obed. Hanu zasko\u010dia. Nesk\u00f4r sa dozvie, \u017ee spolu b\u00fdvaj\u00fa na izbe.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Ot\u00e1zka mocensky vyrovnan\u00fdch vz\u0165ahov bola o\u010dividne potrebn\u00e1. Zvy\u0161ok konferencie str\u00e1vi v ich pr\u00edtomnosti, sleduje ich spr\u00e1vanie.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Jeden ve\u010der pij\u00fa s Anete \u2013 len ony dve \u2013 biele v\u00edno na m\u00fariku pri rieke. Je tepl\u00fd ve\u010der a Hana vysvet\u013euje \u00faskalia slovensk\u00e9ho divadla. A ako nem\u00e1 rada Bratislavu. Kde b\u00fdva, kde \u0161tudovala, povie nie\u010do aj o tom pedag\u00f3govi, ktor\u00fd jej polo\u017eil ruky na stehn\u00e1. Ako ju pobozkal na krk a ke\u010f sa rozplakala, hlasno si vzdychol. Anete o D\u0101visovi nehovor\u00ed, nepozer\u00e1 sa jej do o\u010d\u00ed, ale to mo\u017eno s\u00favis\u00ed s jej pobaltskou povahou.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">F\u013ea\u0161u v opitosti prevr\u00e1tia do rieky. Opit\u00e1 Hana zbehne po schodoch k brehu, vyzuje si top\u00e1nky a sko\u010d\u00ed do vody. Je \u013eadov\u00e1, ale chvalabohu nie hlbok\u00e1. F\u013ea\u0161u v\u00ed\u0165azosl\u00e1vne zdvihne nad hlavu.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Ak\u00e1 si odv\u00e1\u017ena!<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Bozk\u00e1va sa s Anete a str\u00e1via spolu zvy\u0161ok ve\u010dera. R\u00e1no si cestou na posledn\u00fd de\u0148 konferencie vezm\u00fa \u0161koricov\u00e9ho slim\u00e1ka a hnusn\u00fa k\u00e1vu.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Ak\u00e1 je v Est\u00f3nsku k\u00e1va? Lep\u0161ia.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Vymen\u00ed si s \u0148ou WhatsApp. V\u017edy ju balili o to\u013eko star\u0161\u00ed mu\u017ei. Ale diev\u010dat\u00e1 boli rovesn\u00ed\u010dky. To ju te\u0161ilo.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Rozl\u00fa\u010dkov\u00fd ve\u010der str\u00e1via divadeln\u00edci v bare. Anete sed\u00ed o tri stoly \u010falej. Hana s \u0148ou \u010das tie\u017e netr\u00e1vi. Rozpr\u00e1va sa s dramaturgami o financovan\u00ed umeleck\u00e9ho sektoru v ich krajin\u00e1ch. D\u0101visa to zauj\u00edma, cel\u00fd ve\u010der faj\u010dia pred barom a horlivo diskutuj\u00fa.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Potom ju pobozk\u00e1. Najprv len tak z\u013eahka, chcel sk\u00fasi\u0165, \u010do to pon\u00fakne. Str\u010d\u00ed jej jazyk do \u00fast, hlb\u0161ie ako jej ho str\u010dila Anete. Chutili si ako cigarety.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Anete ich preru\u0161\u00ed, potrebuje \u00eds\u0165 na hotel. D\u0101vis s \u0148ou odch\u00e1dza, obj\u00edme ju okolo p\u00e1sa a Hana vid\u00ed, ako mu ruka sk\u013azne trochu ni\u017e\u0161ie.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">R\u00e1no cestuj\u00fa do Berl\u00edna a odtia\u013e lietadlom do Talinu. \u017dena ho u\u017e roky podozrieva, \u010di nem\u00e1 s Anete pomer. Na letisku ho \u010dak\u00e1, obj\u00edmu sa a p\u00fdta sa, ako bolo. Anete sa nep\u00fdta ni\u010d. Z\u013eahka si zam\u00e1vaj\u00fa, ke\u010f nastupuje so svoj\u00edm mu\u017eom do auta. Odvoz jej nepon\u00fakne.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Hane sa v no\u010dnom vlaku sn\u00edva o kr\u00e1snej Anete. Bozk\u00e1va sa s \u0148ou pri ve\u0161iakoch s kab\u00e1tmi, zrazu jeden z nich, \u010derven\u00fd vlnen\u00fd, natiahne svoje ruk\u00e1vy a pevne sa omot\u00e1 Anete okolo krku. Zadus\u00ed ju, Hana jej d\u00e1va prv\u00fa pomoc, no ruky prerazia hrudn\u00edk. Na dlaniach maz\u013eav\u00e1 krv. D\u0101vis kr\u00e1\u010da pre\u010d od m\u0155tvej Anete a Hanin\u00fdch krvav\u00fdch r\u00fak.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Zvy\u0161ok noci Hana presed\u00ed na hornom l\u00f4\u017eku kup\u00e9. \u0160pinav\u00e9 z\u00e1vesy zopnut\u00e9 such\u00fdm zipsom, k\u00farenie, ktor\u00e9 sa ned\u00e1 zn\u00ed\u017ei\u0165, lepkav\u00e1 podlaha a ona uprostred, v py\u017eame s kvetinov\u00fdm vzorom. Predstavuje si v\u00e1\u0161niv\u00fd sex Anete a D\u0101visa.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">D\u0101vis si mesiac po n\u00e1vrate na \u0148u vyp\u00fdta \u010d\u00edslo od Anete. Pozvali ho na stretnutie asoci\u00e1cie dramaturgov do Bratislavy. Dohodn\u00fa sa. A t\u00fd\u017ede\u0148 sexuj\u00fa v luxusnej hotelovej izbe v Starom Meste.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Ich vz\u0165ah trv\u00e1 rok. Volaj\u00fa si, p\u00ed\u0161u, \u010dasto cestuje na Slovensko, ona nikdy za n\u00edm. Jeho tajn\u00e1 uhl\u00edkov\u00e1 stopa diskredituje Anetin doktorandsk\u00fd projekt. A hodnota Haninej karmickej tabu\u013eky kles\u00e1.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Musela by z potokov a riek vylovi\u0165 tis\u00edce plastov\u00fdch flia\u0161, aby dorovnala jeho \u0161kodu na \u017eivotnom prostred\u00ed.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Raz ju po\u010das sexu omylom oslov\u00ed menom Anete. Hana sa po polovi\u010dnom orgazme v hotelovej k\u00fape\u013eni povracia, vyvracia jeho \u017eenu a deti, aj Anetin jazyk, jej dizerta\u010dn\u00fa pr\u00e1cu, aj pedag\u00f3gove pery na krku. Vyvracia m\u00ednusov\u00e9 body a s hlavou str\u010denou v z\u00e1chode sa zmieri, \u017ee si nezasl\u00fa\u017ei, aby niekedy prestala vraca\u0165.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Medzi zubami sa jej zasekne mal\u00fd kus zlat\u00e9ho plastu.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Magda odprevad\u00ed Hanu domov, cestou cez l\u00e1vku. Mohli by \u00eds\u0165 k nej, keby chcela, ale asi je to nar\u00fdchlo. \u017dartuje. Hana sa ospravedln\u00ed. Je zo seba unaven\u00e1, trag\u00e9dka, \u010do v\u0161etko komplikuje. Ale chcela by sa stretn\u00fa\u0165 znova, len sa mus\u00ed da\u0165 dokopy.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">O m\u00ednusov\u00fdch bodoch zatia\u013e nehovor\u00ed.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Obj\u00edmu sa a Magda jej rozdrv\u00ed rebr\u00e1. Pol\u00e1me jej chrbticu, hlava zvesen\u00e1, ruky vykr\u00faten\u00e9. Telo v prstoch trikr\u00e1t prelo\u017e\u00ed, nohy k hlave, e\u0161te raz na polovicu, a\u017e na mal\u00fd \u0161tvorec. Sk\u00f4r ako ju stihne schova\u0165 do vrecka, Hanu odf\u00fakne. Pozer\u00e1, ako kles\u00e1 do potoka pod nimi.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">Magda by mala spravi\u0165 dobr\u00fd skutok.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\">_<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"has-text-align-left wp-block-paragraph\"><em>Emma Vi\u010danov\u00e1 (2001) je \u010derstvou absolventkou odboru divadelnej dramaturgie a dramatickej tvorby na Divadelnej fakulte V\u0160MU v Bratislave. Okrem \u010dinohernej dramaturgie sa zauj\u00edma aj o b\u00e1bkov\u00fa tvorbu \u2013 je spoluzakladate\u013ekou divadeln\u00e9ho zoskupenia \u00dasta V. Albrechta, v ktorom sa venuje autorstvu a spolur\u00e9\u017eii ekodokument\u00e1rnej dr\u00e1my pre deti a ml\u00e1de\u017e. Je autorsky akt\u00edvna, p\u00ed\u0161e najm\u00e4 pr\u00f3zu a dr\u00e1mu. V roku 2024 z\u00edskala pr\u00e9miu v prest\u00ed\u017enej s\u00fa\u0165a\u017ei Poviedka. Spoluorganizuje liter\u00e1rny projekt Medziriadky, v ktorom m\u00e1 na starosti dramaturgiu autorsk\u00fdch \u010d\u00edtan\u00ed.<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image size-large is-resized is-style-rounded\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"1024\" height=\"1024\" src=\"https:\/\/duhovyrok.sk\/qys\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/2\/2026\/09\/EmmaVicanova-1024x1024.jpeg\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-5457\" style=\"width:244px;height:auto\" srcset=\"https:\/\/duhovyrok.sk\/qys\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/2\/2026\/09\/EmmaVicanova-1024x1024.jpeg 1024w, https:\/\/duhovyrok.sk\/qys\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/2\/2026\/09\/EmmaVicanova-150x150.jpeg 150w, https:\/\/duhovyrok.sk\/qys\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/2\/2026\/09\/EmmaVicanova-700x700.jpeg 700w, https:\/\/duhovyrok.sk\/qys\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/2\/2026\/09\/EmmaVicanova-768x768.jpeg 768w, https:\/\/duhovyrok.sk\/qys\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/2\/2026\/09\/EmmaVicanova-1536x1536.jpeg 1536w, https:\/\/duhovyrok.sk\/qys\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/2\/2026\/09\/EmmaVicanova.jpeg 1823w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 1024px) 100vw, 1024px\" \/><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<p class=\"wp-block-paragraph\"><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Autorka: Emma Vi\u010danov\u00e1 \/ Ilustr\u00e1cia: Vikt\u00f3ria Szabov\u00e1 Text sme prv\u00fd raz publikovali v \u010d\u00edsle Leto 2026 Z\u00e1chody \u0161tudentsk\u00e9ho baru, \u013eavi\u010diarske ulice a izolovan\u00e9 m\u00fariky pri rieke sa v texte Emmy Vi\u010danovej st\u00e1vaj\u00fa t\u00fdm najint\u00edmnej\u0161\u00edm miestom, na ktorom sa vymie\u0148aj\u00fa prv\u00e9 pusy s diev\u010da\u0165om a \u0161eptom sa zdie\u013eaj\u00fa sk\u00fasenosti, ktor\u00e9 s\u00fa vo svojej esencii tak\u00e9 \u017eensk\u00e9. <a href=\"https:\/\/duhovyrok.sk\/qys\/bordel-z-rieky-bez-namocenia-nohavic-nevylovis\/\" class=\"more-link\">&#8230;<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":21,"featured_media":5412,"comment_status":"closed","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[257,13],"tags":[266,348,518,713],"class_list":["post-5376","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","has-post-thumbnail","hentry","category-literatura","category-viditelnost","tag-from-qys","tag-literarna-priloha","tag-literatura","tag-umelecka-sekcia"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/duhovyrok.sk\/qys\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/5376","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/duhovyrok.sk\/qys\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/duhovyrok.sk\/qys\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/duhovyrok.sk\/qys\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/21"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/duhovyrok.sk\/qys\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=5376"}],"version-history":[{"count":6,"href":"https:\/\/duhovyrok.sk\/qys\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/5376\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":5463,"href":"https:\/\/duhovyrok.sk\/qys\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/5376\/revisions\/5463"}],"wp:featuredmedia":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/duhovyrok.sk\/qys\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media\/5412"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/duhovyrok.sk\/qys\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=5376"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/duhovyrok.sk\/qys\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=5376"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/duhovyrok.sk\/qys\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=5376"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}